That deep blue，It reflects the blue sky.The free fish，To swim slowly，No one to stop them.No matter whether he is on the surface of the ripple, and no matter he quietly shed the light of the sun，Go to the deep sea.　The water there is more cold, the air pressure is higher, the more black.Only a few fish live in where.But that is more quiet, no one disturb.　Dark, and lonely，That is the deep sea.

修改后：
Looking through that deep blue，it reflects the blue sky. You can see the free fish swim slowly. No one stops them, no matter he is on the surface of the ripple, or he quietly shed the light of the sun. Go to the deep sea,  the water there is much colder, and the pressure is much higher. Only a few fish can live where. Dark, quiet and lonely. That is the deep sea.

修改老师：Crystal 老师 

　　五年级:曹静薇

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