Dear Jack，

 

　I’m sorry to hear that you fell nervous before the exam.

 

　I have some advice for you. I hope I can help you. I think confidence isimportant power for learning. So you should build up confidence. You can draw up a review plan.making a plan is a good idea. It can give you a mind map . As a student ,working hard is important, but don’t forget to do exercise every day. For example,run,swin and ball games.those are spores we can do.Doing sports every day helps us keep healthy and energetic. Don’t stay up! We all know stay up bad for us health. I think you should keep healthy habit for sleeping.readucing the pressure of exam.I believe you can pass the exam. Good luck to you!

 

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　Yours,

 

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Li hua  

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Dear Jack,

　I’m sorry to hear that you alwaysfeel nervous before the exam.

　I have some advice for you. I hope I can help you. I think you should make a review plan first. It can help you review the lessons efficiently. Then you need to work hard according to your plan, but don’t forget to do some exercise which can help you keep healthy and energetic. For example, you can run, swim and do some ball games. Don’t stay up! It is bad for your health. I think you should keep healthy sleeping habit which can help you relax and reduce the pressure of exam. I believe you can pass the exam. Good luck!

 

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Yours,

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 Li hua   

 

　　高二:蔡梓微

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