⑤对比: in the same way(同样地)， just as(正如)， on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。
相似的比较： similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如:
〔原文〕a new railway is being built in my hometown.
〔修正〕a new railway is under construction in my hometown. 共4页
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6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:
〔原文〕i like reading while my brother likes watching television.
〔修正〕i like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
i like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.
三、 结尾
1、 all in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……（比如说到和谐社会 all in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.）
2、 therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……
3、 as a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.（我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么）
4、 from what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……
5、 obviously（此为过渡短语）, we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
四、 一些用法
1、 陈述个人的观点
it is alleged that(据说)
in my view, both sides are partly right(两方面都部分的正确)
as far as i am concerned(就我而言)
as regards to me
my own point of view is that……
personally, i believe that……
my experience tells me that……
the invention of the handset, i dare to say, turns out to be a tremendous hit.
the application of web sites, i dare to say, turns out to be a greatly hit.