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My bedroom

也曾聽杜鵑的輕啼..魂也依依..夢也依依。 Aranea

I think my bedroom is very good,I like it. You?
    I have a very good bedroom.It's very small,but iy's very beautiful and very lovely. Look!The black computer, some books and the yellow lamp on the broom desk,chair is near the desk. My bed is small, But my toys and dolls on the bed, my old pencil-box under the bed. Oh! It's apple kite on the white wall. it's very lovely! I think my bedroom is very good ,I like it. You?
 
{说几句}:学校作业[My bedroom]..又发上来了.没改过..不知道怎么样..有什么意见和建议一定要提出来哦!
                                 
                                        -By Aranea-
 
  • 小学6年级 - 记叙文 - 状物
  • 字数:369 投稿日期:2007-8-28 10:32:00
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